[citation][nom]TomsGuideRachel[/nom]I'm glad you picked up on the fact that this isn't a straight review, and IS listed as an Opinion piece.
/sigh yes...I understand this. Let me try to explain better.
[citation][nom]TomsGuideRachel[/nom]
That said, a good editorial doesn't just say "I like it because it is green." A good editorial explains why "green" has utility for certain users, and is more than just a pretty color. If we use this analogy, I think Bill's piece succeeded. There's no doubt that only a small percentage of the population gets "utility from the color green"
This is pretty much what I was angling at. Its better to qualify things first, THEN deliver your personal $.02. Especially when writing about your opinion. It helps the reader identify and better understand where the author is coming from when explain their rational. In this case the color green (this analogy will never die) is the lit keyboard. Bill placed utility value on this (and for very good reason) but it wasn't really qualified in advance so the general population (or at least myself) had no idea what he really meant. Another example is talking about how the aluminum case adds durability with not much to really qualify it. etc. etc.
Thus the benefit of qualifying things first and foremost, ideally with numbers and/or objective comparisons when possible. Then a reader can hopefully say "ahhh I can see why that would be useful to the author". Otherwise the reader is more prone to be annoyed and confused by the author's metric of values. Obviously its not possible to write something in a way that every gets what you are saying and it would be tedious in the extreme to try, but hopefully this makes more sense to you this time around?
[citation][nom]TomsGuideRachel[/nom]
but I wanted to expose the rest of you to a different kind of user--...(cut)....for a specific list of highly-niche, specific, and yes--logical--reasons. You said you wouldn't have published an article about why your mom's laptop is perfect for her. Well, I would. That's what we're about here at Tom's Guide--examining the gadget wants and needs of a wide swath of consumers, including, but not limited to those who only want the best *bang* for their buck, or only want a top-performing machine.
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I wasn't clear enough again. I know that logic was employed in the decision. Its employed in nearly every decision. Its just felt that it was (in some of the reasons) not included in a way that that catered to a full understanding of where the author was coming from or missed details that would have been useful to have. Like explaining a reason to someone with incomplete context. They don't get the full benefit/impact of how you arrived at your conclusion, personal, statisticle or otherwise.
When I say "I wouldn't write an article rating the value of a laptop based on my or my mother's personal values and bias" I mean that I litterally wouldn't rate the value of the laptop itself by personal standards or someone else's personal standard. That doesn't mean that I wouldn't explain or theorize situations/occupations/personalities/etc. where aspects take on stronger than normal values or fill particular nitches very well. But it means I would add in the neccesary context and details so that someone else that doesn't know me or my mother can hopefully get a clear understanding of why that reason matters for x nitch.
To me "examining the gadget wants and needs of a wide swath of consumers" implies focusing on providing information in a way that lets a wide array get tangible information to make their own informed decisions. In that sense I feel this article could have been written better. It wasn't terrible, but it also wasn't nearly as useful to a wide audience as it could have been with a little extra detail. Some added context and actual figures and values would have gone a long way to remedy that. As I said before though it didn't deserve the level of heat it recieved I felt.
Of course we may simply agree to disagree on this one, and ultimately I have little say in the matter. 😉
But I do like to get to the root of where a misunderstanding occurs and figure out where I misspoke, or could have worded things better. The downside being long posts.
Anyway I hope this made more sense?
[citation][nom]TomsGuideRachel[/nom]
I do my best to not allow my personal preferences exclude other voices on Tom's Guide. I really do try to be as inclusive as we can be. [/citation]
That's all anyone can do.